The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a touching article and it is certainly on topic. I longed to know more about the MC. You did a great job of pulling me into the story.
I couldn't stop reading this excellent story. I too would like to know more about the MC - ah the limits of 750 words. :-) I was also a little confused to begin with. I had the ides initially that Nathan was the MC's sibling. A word or two there might have made that more clear. Hope to see a lot more of your writing.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.