The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a powerful and eloquent command of the king's English. To me, historical fiction is one of the most difficult genres to write in. But to some, they make it seem so facile - done with apparent ease. That takes great talent, which you've displayed here. I'm hoping that the theme (discernment) is not hidden too deeply in the complexity that it is overlooked - but other wise A+.
You did a great job with the language and dialog. I'm not quite sure I understood it all, but it was still suspenseful and it encouraged me to keep reading.
08/23/10
Great writing. I hope the topic is strong enough! this should be prize material in my thinking, course, I'm a beginner to.