The Official Writing Challenge
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God does work in mysterious ways. I'm glad you were able to share your story.
08/20/10
I'm glad that you got to share this. Too bad it didn't get on last week. WE FIGHT against principalites and powers. Perhaps you were having a battle with the one who would not want you to share your great decision.
This might work with this week's topic as well, in that your MC's friend discerned she (the friend) was ready to allow the Holy Spirit to come into her life. Your writing moves quickly and is easy to read and enjoy.
08/23/10
I think it fits, I wouldn't have used discern in first paragraph but its a good piece of writing. Keep writing.