The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/10
Excellent. I was totally caught up in the girl's life. Great transition from the human to the spiritual.
07/29/10
Beautiful. It's so hard being shy, I know from experience. But focusing on Jesus is the only way we can get out of ourselves.
I so enjoyed your analogy. How true it is. Thank you for sharing.
08/02/10
This is an insightful writing. I too like the analogy and the "humaness" of the piece.
08/04/10
What wonderful imagery. You seamlessly wove the story of the physical eye into the emotional eye and created a beautiful vision of salvation.
08/05/10
I could feel and see the struggles of your mc. Great imagery. Congrats on your well-deserved recognition.
08/12/10
After you introduced yourself on the forum, I was anxious to read the work of "another Nancy". I had already read this one, and it is a wonderful analogy of our spiritual "I sight". Congratulations on a well-deserved pat on the back!
God Bless
Nancy