The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, would I love to read what Dawn wrote! :)

This was entertaining and I felt for you with the interview. Also loved the mountain cabin and I too, like being snowed in! Something cozy and warm about it.

Be sure to use a spell-checking program and or modify the one you have, to check for all grammar mistakes, as that's the only thing I could find needing a little tweaking :)
I want his life! Haha. Hiking, peace and quiet, writing. Sounds heavenly. Making this a diary entry was creative.

Minor red notes: change "allot" to "a lot" and "haft to" to "have to."

Keep up the good work!
I loved the diary approach. I love a quiet, peaceful place with the beauty of nature all around. I enjoyed this very much. Good job.
I hope Steve gained a good report. Good story. Thank you for sharing it. Keep writing, fellow writer, for the glory of God.
The dialogue between your characters flows so well. Keep writing and learning.
Great job! Nancy