The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, would I love to read what Dawn wrote! :)

This was entertaining and I felt for you with the interview. Also loved the mountain cabin and I too, like being snowed in! Something cozy and warm about it.

Be sure to use a spell-checking program and or modify the one you have, to check for all grammar mistakes, as that's the only thing I could find needing a little tweaking :)
I want his life! Haha. Hiking, peace and quiet, writing. Sounds heavenly. Making this a diary entry was creative.

Minor red notes: change "allot" to "a lot" and "haft to" to "have to."

Keep up the good work!
I loved the diary approach. I love a quiet, peaceful place with the beauty of nature all around. I enjoyed this very much. Good job.
I hope Steve gained a good report. Good story. Thank you for sharing it. Keep writing, fellow writer, for the glory of God.
06/22/10
The dialogue between your characters flows so well. Keep writing and learning.
Great job! Nancy