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A beautiful mother-daughter tribute. I loved the fact that she was able to find the happiness between the pain of losing her mother.

This was a beautiful, bittersweet piece--thanks for sharing!
What a loving, caring and tender testimonial to your mother. You did a good job bringing the reader into your heart and emotions. I felt privileged!

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05/14/10
You did a good job of emotionally drawing me in. That mother-daughter relationship is so special.
Fantastic. So tender and touching the relationship betweent mother and child. God is the ultimate critiquer. Good job.
05/18/10
Sweet and precious story of mother and daughter relationship. Your mother echoed the mother-heart in me about my own children in your first few paragraphs. It brought me to tears. God bless you for writing this tribute.