The Official Writing Challenge
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What a whimsical and useful poem. I did notice in the comma stanza you used their instead of they're. But I took such delight in reading this the typo hardly mattered.
04/30/10 an English teacher, I appreciated the gathering of punctuation to make writing complete.
(You'll learn how to format better as you enter more. I had trouble at first, too.)
This is extremely creative!

For the formatting--in the massage boards, you use brackets, but for challenge submissions, you use the < and > keys.

I totally "got" this despite the formatting glitches, and I found it highly amusing.
You implemented many of the "writer's tools" in this! …and in a most creative way!! Nice work!