The Official Writing Challenge
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Heartfelt and meaningful. Well done!
04/23/10
Very nicely done. I have no knowledge of how to critique a poem, but I can say this was a joy to read. I felt the emotion, your passion for this beloved book, which happens to be my favorite too.
A beautiful poem. I could easily feel how important the Bible is to you. Your rhyming pattern is different than some poems but your message comes across loud and clear
I liked your take on this topic. Good job. :)
04/28/10
You have a wonderful message here and you've used some great words in this heart-felt poem!
04/28/10
Beautiful poem! I like the part where you said "they only found Him guilty of love." That part is really cool. Oh, that everyone would become a reader of The Book!

P.S. Remember that in the Challenge entries, italics are made with <> instead of [] [/].

Great job, and very "on topic."
04/28/10
You have created a wonderful mind picture of The Book. Adding the word "Dusty" made your poem a very sad commentary about the condition of the world today. Good poem.
04/28/10
Your poem must have been good as it struck home. There's too much dust on my bible. Good job.