The Official Writing Challenge
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I can see this as a good show and tell story for younger school aged children, with the message of going to jail or prison being comparable to death.

You did a good job with your dialogue.
That was certainly a unique way to discuss this week's topic. It made me think about how something that seems so insignificant can actually be so very important. Great job.
A fresh idea to describe the old adage. A few editing tweaks were needed here and there, but you did a great job of getting your message across.