The Official Writing Challenge
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Gooood Job on your dialogue! What a great praise testimony of how we all feel, at times, that there is just no way God can answer "this prayer", and he does. Hope this is true and you really did get to go to Peru. :)
03/20/10
I like the way you varied your dialog--some with tags, some without. Well done.

Work on making your dialog sound a bit more relaxed, perhaps.

A good story of how our wonderful God works.
03/21/10
When I saw your title, I had to read this. :) I've heard stories exactly as you describe in your entry. I'm always amazed at how God works (I know I shouldn't be though). I enjoyed this!
03/22/10
It is awesome to watch and wait to see what wow! things God is going to do.
Your story shows what wonderful things can happen when we pray.
Congratulations on placing in the top 12 in your level!