The Official Writing Challenge
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This gave me a good chuckle. I was so glad you ended up explaining that even you didn't understand why you poured the water into your plates. I said whaaaaaat?, but just kept reading thinking, it was me, not getting something. This was refreshing to read about an era gone by, that I wish we could have hung onto. Simplicity with gratefulness.
Very sweet, nostalgic atmosphere.

Teensy editing hint: write out numbers less than twenty in words, rather than using the digits.

I really enjoyed this one, and could imagine every moment. Well done.