The Official Writing Challenge
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A very good message.

Just remember to make a new paragraph when someone new is speaking and double spacing between each paragraph will make it easier to read.

It was a suspenseful story with conflict to engage the reader and a nice lesson in the end. good job!
All I could think of after the ending was; "Vengeance is mine, saith the Lord". So, yes, vengeance is a frightening place to walk in. Good message.

You had me gripped in this story and wanted to see how it ended. I would like to see it continue with Samantha getting help. :)