The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this! Thanks for sharing!
I loved this too, but I'd like a brief explanation of how Britt and Havard connected. I appreciate that you didn't give your reader a "pat answer" for the ending, though, and left it a mystery.
Well done! You should think of moving up to Level 2.
Great story but the last paragraph threw me. I thought Britt was doing the searching and got confused by the last mention of her name.
I would love to know: is this a true story? This was beautiful and well-written. You should consider moving up a level. Well done.
This is very good, but I too was thrown by the last paragraph.
Ann, your entry rated quite well with the Level 1 judges, but as most of the comments on it have expressed, the ending let it down. It was a very well written story, but it left the reader more than a bit confused at the end. I think it was just one of those things where we get a little lost in the translation of the idea. But be encouraged, you did actually do very well and I'm sure we'll see some more very good stories from you in the future. I'll look forward to reading them. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)