The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/10
I fell in love with little Ladybug, you described her so well.

Excellent use of "eek", too.
03/08/10
I'll never look at old quilts the same. You told a smooth and engaging story.
Precious interaction between mother and daughter. Brought back memories for me. I lost my breath over the quilt thread and felt what you must have felt, while deperately looking for those scissors. YES, God is good. No mistake having you fall asleep with her!
I knew something bad was going to happen by the tone, I was in suspense until the very end.
Yay, Rikki, congrats on your win! See you in Level 2!
03/13/10
Congratulations! I love the sweet dialogue and found myself holding my breath at the end too. Great job.
03/13/10
Fantastic! Beautiful wording and surprise ending! Loved the dimmer switch, could just see a dimly lit room!