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03/04/10
I loved this piece in poetry. Only one little deviation from the Word. Peter said for Jesus to wash all of him, when he understood Jesus' love for him in spite of his many faults. Other than that, very well done.
03/04/10
Wonderful use of assonance!
03/05/10
Yes, very good understanding of assonance. This is one of my favorites.
03/05/10

I liked this poem because of the way it was written as a dialogue between Jesus and Peter.

Very clever use of Scripturein this piece!
I love the play on words in the title. You showed a great deal of talent.
03/08/10
Liked the way this summarized Peter's walk and the Lord's love for us all, and the purpose of the Holy Spirit, so well.
03/11/10
Great message wrapped up in this poem. I love the brilliance of this, "I took that big leap -- over the side of the boat -- and then cried out,’eek?’ -- when my faith sprung a leak..." and the "faith sprung a leak" just made me smile! :)
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