The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/10
Reading your story was a little like the beauty of a brief but fragrant breath of air that catches me by surprise.
02/28/10
You hit the nail on the head with this:
My child, always remember to include Me at the dawn of each new day, and I will carry your daily burdens for you.
What a busy mother. It does seem to make the day easier if we turn to God first. This could be a great devotion for The Upper Room. Add scripture reading and a prayer and you have something special.
03/02/10
A lovely devotional that would be appreciated by all busy moms.

It will make your entries easier to read if you add an extra 'enter' for white space between paragraphs.

I look forward to reading more from you in this challenge.