The Official Writing Challenge
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Good message!
Just realized the last line got cut off when I submitted - and I'm not sure how to change it...It's "But a treasure in heaven will never bring sorrow." Sorry about that guys!
02/26/10
This is beautiful! Beautifully written and a beautiful message. :):)
02/27/10
I love this line:
In the midst of the chaos, this Mom made a choice
To ignore for a while those things with no voice
A beautiful poem that reminds me how quickly the little ones grow.
03/02/10
Very good poem--your rhyme and meter were both quite well done.
Beautiful focus on right priorities in a melodic format. Loved it!