The Official Writing Challenge
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Encouraging message of God being with us through all of our trials.

I am a newbie around here and a beginner also, so not sure of the correct terminology, but suggest you double space when changing to each point? Or maybe that is how this poetry is suppose to me?
I enjoyed your poem. It had such intense rhymes. It was short, but maybe a little white space would make it easier to read. The words are powerful and motivating.
03/02/10
This is an EXCELLENT poem!
03/04/10
Gorgeous work! I think this is a pantoum (or some form of one). Your phrases (and the way they are repeated) are powerful! This is not an easy poetic form to write, and you did wonderfully!