The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
"Loved This!" I've never seen a poem written like this, but it worked for me. Maybe you have developed your own style. "Super!" "God Bless You"
Wow! What a poem! Well written and a great story line. Wonderful talent here! Thanks for sharing!
09/07/05
A few minor edits for consistency of meter would make this lovely poem of reconciliation superb.
09/09/05
Love the rhyming couplets in your poem and the way you handled your anger until you asked for forgiveness. Very creative.