The Official Writing Challenge
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A wonderfully written sweet story of love. Perhaps you could add some spacing between the "***'s" Thanks for sharing!
09/07/05
I wasn't clear if the grammar slips were a sort of dialect, or just typos. But I really liked this story; with some editing it could be top-notch.
09/09/05
Great story of love and devotion and the efficacy of prayer.