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02/18/10
I liked the rhyme, because poetry speaks to me like no other words. So sad that all of us are plagued with this malady at times. How can God be so patient with us? No one ever loved as Jesus!
02/20/10
You reveal the human heart and struggle here very well. Most sincere Christians have this same problem and would be encouraged to read this piece.
Spending more time with the Lord on a one on one is something, most of us need more of. Well put. I was touched by your sentence with: like sin is in season, pretty descriptive of our world right now.
02/25/10
Nicely written and a beautiful reminder of grace! I need to do some soul-searching after reading your poem.
Wow, very real poem, love your title!