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The way that you ended this is very impressive. You did a nice job of taking the "Phew," and using it in 2 different opposite, and yet correct ways. Good job!
What a great testimony! Made me look at moments of frustration in a new light.
I like how you tied a piece of the Old Testament to the New. That's harmony.
you made it applicable to readers. you drew our attention using the the tension between opposites. and you left us with hope. nicely done.
Very nice message. You did a good job bringing many worlds into the most important by ending it with prayer. Good job.