The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
The way that you ended this is very impressive. You did a nice job of taking the "Phew," and using it in 2 different opposite, and yet correct ways. Good job!
What a great testimony! Made me look at moments of frustration in a new light.
02/19/10
I like how you tied a piece of the Old Testament to the New. That's harmony.
02/20/10
you made it applicable to readers. you drew our attention using the the tension between opposites. and you left us with hope. nicely done.
Very nice message. You did a good job bringing many worlds into the most important by ending it with prayer. Good job.