The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
I like your description of his strength. This story kept my attention and flowed very well.
Letters from the dead...The Lord does work in mysterious ways, doesn't He? Great job! Thanks for sharing!
09/07/05
Very intriguing. I like the way you put everything together to show how God works miraculously.
09/07/05
Interesting ghost story! There were a few inconsistencies in verb tense.