The Official Writing Challenge
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Great piece! We have all experienced days like that! We growl. Surely, God grins!
I love the story that you tell through this poem! It flows beautifully and humorously, all the while preparing you for the wonderful lesson at the end. Masterful job!
"Keenly aware 'me world' must crumble" What a great line.
Loved the whole piece! Well done.
I like the way you shift the poem from what's going on to looking beyond, and especially the response from our Lord. Touches the heart!
Hey Kelli, congrats on placing 6th in Level 1 with your entry! You are among some great writers, so good job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings posted on the forums: