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What a beautiful heart-wrenching story. i felt your pain and understood your indignation. I'm so happy that you did not give up on God. This was written with such emotion and love. Thank you for sharing a very difficult yet wonderful story.
Thank you for sharing your deepest emotions. Wonderful that through all your bewilderment, you still sensed God holding you, and that ultimately He had a beautiful plan for you to be blessed AND be a blessing!
You expressed this situation and the heartache that goes along with it so well. Very touching!
Your last image is one that I've had to cling to in my own dark time--thanks for expressing it so eloquently.
Having had to minister at funerals of babies who were born early or died too young, I can relate to the grief. Beautiful story, well written. A real winner.
The hope shines through in your heart-rending story. Thank you for writing this.
Such a moving story. God bless you.
Perfect title. Thank you for sharing your touching story.
Very well done.
A heart-wrenching story beautifully told. You took the reader right into the narrator's thoughts and emotions - making it all so real. My only suggestion is regarding the formatting of your paragraphs. A space between them would be easier on the eyes - but that aside, you wrote a stellar piece.
Wow. You eloquently took us through her grief and questions. God will always be there for us. Even when he can't understand. God Bless!
A heartbreaking story filled with raw and very real emotion. Well written reminder that God holds us in our despair. Well done.
What heart-wrenching story! I loved the last line... so true. Thank you so much for sharing your moving personal experience!
This article can be used to minister to countless people who have experienced the loss of a baby. The line "descent into the darkness of incomprehension" really spoke to me.
Beautiful title to go along with this bitter-sweet story of God's omnipotence. He always knows what's best, even when we don't know what's going on.

Congratulations on your win! You deserve it. :)
This is a wonder article! As the adoptive mom of 4 children, I could relate to much of your story.

Thank you for telling our story in such a realistic, yet beautiful, way.
What a wonderful story reflecting Adonai's ability to know what is ahead of you and make a sweet story such as yours an announcement of His plan for your life. I especially loved the way you showed us your pain buy the sound of the windshield wipers. Great touch. Thank you for sharing your heart.