The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful and so true! I really like your descriptions, especially the "waves crashing in the darknesss and receding." :):)
Very good description of labour, alot of us can relate!
Great title!

This is well-written; since it's a very familiar experience to a large percent of your audience, maybe you could add some twist?

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

I hope you write more here--you're a writer with lots of potential.