The Official Writing Challenge
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Humorous story! It would, however, be easier to read if you included quotation marks. A fun read from the character's point of view. :)
Very cute story. I felt like I was in the chair myself!
What a reminder! I don't know how many times that I have visited "Dr. Torture" in my life! BUT each time was a trip I would like to forget. Always hated it when they stuff your mouth full and then ask you questions!
I'm a real dental-phobic, so I winced through this whole story. Very well done!

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

This is one of my favorites on this level.
This is so true to life. I especially enjoyed the questioning of exactly how much they can get in your mouth. Very good.