The Official Writing Challenge
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I guess there's a crude ornery boy in almost every family! He probably needed his ego zapped. ;)
I emjoyed reading this 'family memory' - hope you have a few more of those for future Challenges.
LOL! This is a great reminder to me of some of the things my 6 siblings and I did growing up. I lived on a cattle ranch during my high school years, so I can actually picture this happening. Poor kid!
Yikes! Ow is right! Thanks for the morning smile.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

I really liked the rustic atmosphere of this engaging story.
Relish the memories. I have no childhood ones that are fun like that. You did a good job of creating the scene. I was right there with you.
Oh, that is definitely cringe worthy. He was so fortunate he wasn't seriously hurt. Bet that was one lesson he never repeated lol.

Love the title - perfect and didn't give anything away. Well done on your Highly Commended too.