The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
Very interesting!

You had so many words left over--I'd love to have read more about the tornado incident. Consider telling it like a story, with characters and dialog.

Very nice writing--please keep it up!
12/16/09
Good story. Keep writing.
03/05/11
Bonnie, this was a very great article. I am sure that it was a boost to many and a great testimony for my(our) Jesus.