The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
You have a poetic sense of language.

My only problem with this is that it's dramatically written, but it doesn't seem to go anywhere...I was looking for some conflict, or an object lesson...

I'd encourage you to keep writing, because you do it well--explore the purpose for your writing and take it to the next level.
12/15/09
Interesting view on the topic. Keep writing.