The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
How blessed she is to have you! Thanks for sharing this with us.

Watch out for run-on sentences and comma splices.

I could easily visualize her room from her description! Well done.
12/12/09
Thank you for being such a wonderful mom to Shelby. It's amazing what color can do to change the look of a room. Just try to keep from running your sentences together without punctuation.