The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
Thanks for showing us the "story after the story".

Watch your punctuation, especially of dialog.

This was a very entertaining read.
12/14/09
great idea to tell the story from this angle. There are a few grammar/spelling issues, but overall, a good story.
I enjoyed your story very much. We both chose to write about the same person so I suppose our viewpoint wasn't as unique as I thought. Good writing.
I have never been able to write a prose for the Challenge Contests. I have found it an uphill task to do ....... I feel most times as though I'm bound. But this story about blind Bartimaeus is beginning to set me loose. Thank you very much for what your article has afforded me. And again, you have written very simply too!