The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
Excellent personification in the title, and repeated throughout.

I'm not sure how this relates to the topic for this week.

I like the flow of this unusual poem.
12/11/09
Your poem is such a wonderful expression of the impact of Jesus love. I only saw the use of the color red. I wasn't sure where the theme, Colorful World, was incorporated.