The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/09
Good use of dialogue. A little more description of the characters would be nice. Keep writing.


Cute story with the parishoner coming to the aid of the pastor. Spice it up with more detains for a great devotional piece!

A tip: watch out for typos and misspells. Bone up on the grammar! Looks like you'd make a good story-teller. Blessings.