The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/09
I like your use of simile and metaphor in these lines: "It started as a little flame, in one place, one city. The next moment it was like a weed that had multiplied over a century." You certainly gave me an intense feel of oppression and grave circumstances. Some of your thoughts were unclear. Keep writing.
11/11/09
Good to see faith survive in tough times. Keep writing.