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Super descriptions, and such a powerful analogy. Very good! You put me there.
A touching account of relationships between fathers and sons, that are often so delicate. Good work.
Powerful thoughts presented...the son being part of the fathers fertile ground...also love the thought that the father treasured the fleeting moments when their hearts mingled...just beautiful all around.
Excellent - kept me reading and feeling the passion all the way through. What a great story of a father passing on wisdom to his son.
Excellent, in how deeply you have drawn us into the feelings, colours and developing maturity of a close relationship.
I enjoyed how you've bridged across from garden chores to family growth and transition, and how you've expressed your hope for the future.