The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/09
Super descriptions, and such a powerful analogy. Very good! You put me there.
11/02/09
A touching account of relationships between fathers and sons, that are often so delicate. Good work.
11/02/09
Powerful thoughts presented...the son being part of the fathers fertile ground...also love the thought that the father treasured the fleeting moments when their hearts mingled...just beautiful all around.
Excellent - kept me reading and feeling the passion all the way through. What a great story of a father passing on wisdom to his son.
11/05/09
Excellent, in how deeply you have drawn us into the feelings, colours and developing maturity of a close relationship.
I enjoyed how you've bridged across from garden chores to family growth and transition, and how you've expressed your hope for the future.