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10/22/09
a humourous peice and I like the not a blackberry pie at the end!
10/27/09
A good picture of the poor pregnant hormonal wife. Life is just hard sometimes. You injected the right amount of humor. It is good like a medicine after all.Well done.
10/28/09
This is well-written, and in a tone that made me feel as if I know you.

The longer two paragraphs could be broken down into shorter ones, I think.

Love your title--very cute!
Loved how it had a story feel to it, but shared truth with a devotional style. Clever use of black and double meaning of blackberry - great job with this!