The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Interesting! I like how the Voice penetrates the darkness. Watch your rhythm. It's a little rough in places. Keep it up!
10/28/09
You carried the black very well. You could feel it. Keep writing
10/28/09
Heartfelt testimony--thanks!

Have you checked out the "Jan's Master Class" on poetry? It's more of a guided discussion, actually, in the message boards. We're coving all kinds of poetry, and we'd love to have you pop in! All poets welcome!
10/29/09
Powerful penned emotions!
10/29/09
"I swallowed the bile of despair..." Very strong metaphor that creates an incredible word picture as much of the poem does. Good work.