The Official Writing Challenge
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Congrats on your first try!
Yes, sheep are among us. The contrast gives color to our lives! I liked the banking section; because standing in lines can bring out the worst in all of us!
This is a good example of God making no distinction between people, he is no respecter of persons. We all have souls that will never die and there is only one way to get to heaven, through him.
Well done--you tapped into some worldwide irritations!

For your readers' sake, an extra "enter" between paragraphs, please?

I enjoyed this glimpse at another culture.