The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Well written. Plain and simple. Even a child can understand.Just the way the Father wanted it to be.
10/27/09
God blesses young minds with the ability grasp things with which we often struggle as adults. I hope to pass on this simplicity of teaching to the children who come through my home, and that they would understand it simply too.
10/28/09
Nice children's story, would be good in a Sunday School paper.