The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/09
Passionate article filled with convictions!
10/25/09
There are many ideas and concepts in your writing that could be unpacked and explained further. You had a lot to work in this wonderful topic.
10/26/09
A sad commentary on the world.A call to action to right the wrongs. But there are those who are loved and raised to Love the Lord and live for Him, and they do.Jesus is the hope for tomorrow.We need to share it.
You wrote a black picture well.
10/27/09
you pack so much into such short lines. i agree that you could expand each little piece into something just as powerful. but, as is, I wanted to see it copied and posted so all the world might see it. well done.
10/27/09
Your passion is very evident.

The words in all-caps were a bit distracting. Trust in the passion of your writing to give the emphasis, without having to shout it at your reader.

Well done, and right on topic.