The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/09
With such specific detail I'm assuming that your family actually took this trip. This account makes me want to go there for sure. Out of the mouth of babes.
10/17/09
That's a beautiful story. My only suggestion is to put spaces between your paragraphs next time. It makes it easier to read.
Wow, great take on the topic and beautifully written!

Congrats on your placing!