The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/09
This was a beautiful story of the importance of family treasures.
10/18/09
Such a sweet story.A good story of Blue.
10/21/09
Oh I do like this story . the story itself is like a fabric and a family tree. Beautiful.
It was short enough and held my attention so that not having spacings and paragraphs did not matter too much, but think about it for your next peice!. I would put this one in my top ten!
10/22/09
congratulations and what did I say! Just pipped at the post into the top three . The entries in beginners are good!