The Official Writing Challenge
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Very very cute, funny and oh so true... if you've been there. I really liked this!
10/17/09
You have great description which draws in the reader and makes this story easy to imagine. I think many of us can relate to the loneliness she is feeling.
10/21/09
well done. I like this one and well crafted, think you will soon be moving up!
10/22/09
what did I tell you. congratulations and I will see you in the intermediates. The good new is that there are fewer contributors there,