The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/09
Oh, what a cringe-worthy situation!

This seemed to be both a work of fiction and a Bible study, and it sort of jumped around. I'd suggest writing the story first (and using quotation marks), then concluding with your Scriptural message.

Great title--a really good hook to attract your readers' attention.