The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
WOW! You have captured the heartbreak and hope of Mary so very well. This is great and very well written.
10/10/09
Definitely my favorite on this level so far. Excellent!
10/11/09
This is a wonderful story. You handled the topic well. It is a great illustration of how Mary must have felt when Christ was on the cross.
10/12/09
Yes, you capture a mother's heart! It is power packed! the Lord opened up the heart of Mary to you, to share with others!
10/16/09
Awesome look into the heart of our Lord's mother. Thank you.
Congratulations on the Highly Commended rating this entry was given.
10/17/09
Congratulations, Theresa, on the high placing of your story. Well earned!

I echo the sentiments of the others about how well you've portrayed Mary's side of the story. We don't get to hear too much about what it was like for Mary, so this story was a great thought provoker for all of us.
10/21/09
What a powerful and realistic sharing of the emotions Mary must have felt on that long ago day.
Congrats on being highly commended for this deserving entry.