The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
LOL...that is so precious! Very well written!
09/11/09
Nice story. Lots of good things in there.
09/16/09
It is easy to envision this scene taking place. The description and dialogue are easy to follow. I especially like the line :'Ameeee--got bited--by a beeee! Sally sobbed.' That completely sounds like a small child.
09/17/09
Precious story about your "double dose" of childhood adventure.
09/17/09
Congratulations on being Highly Commended for your level. Keep up the good writing.
09/17/09
This story is so real, especially to those of us with daughters who love playing drama queens! Congratulations on this one being highly commended. Your last paragraph made me smile!