The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting approach to the topic.

You might want to start our your entries with a bit more of a "hook" - something that grabs our attention and makes us curious for what will be said next.

I like the earthly and heavenly parallels. Nicely done!
This could be an interesting devotional for new or expecting parents. I think I would try to break some of it up into shorter paragraphs to make it easier to digest. Good Job. Keep Writing!
Nothing to add to the previous comments - except to say I enjoyed this devotional.
While I agree with the other comments, I thought your prayer at the end was especially good.
Well-organized and well thought out.

I did find it just a tad dry, though...perhaps opening with something more personal would be a better hook.

An important read!