The Official Writing Challenge
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Been there, done that, prayed for that ending! You wrote it well. I liked this alot. Many may be shocked by the way you ended it... but that just means they've never been there.
08/22/09
I have also been there and lived to tell about it so I could totally relate to the MC's voice, yet the ending was still a tough one.Uncomfortable may be a better word.
Wow! I did not erxpect the story to end that way, but I liked it. You were able to tell a complete story in a few words. Even though the story did not depict any of the abuse, I could see every bit of it. I could feel the anxiety. And the relief. Good job.
Wow! I did not expect the story to end that way, but I liked it. You were able to tell a complete story in a few words. Even though the story did not depict any of the abuse, I could see every bit of it. I could feel the anxiety. And the relief. Good job.