The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/09
Interesting contrasts!
Try to refrain from the explanations, give the reader credit for understanding your hints.
Keep writing...well done!
Yea, I hear you! Minnesota has fine winter weather for the young'uns!

But what about the older folks? I'll take southern Illinois' more temperate winter anytime now!

Loved your comparisions. Good piece of writing!
What wonderful contrasts you give within this writing. As your sister, I know what Minnesota weathers are like. However, since I have never lived in southern Illinois, now I have an idea of what their winters are like. Don't you want to come back here to freeze your nose off? I miss you and love you. Your sister, Gloria